Tuesday, May 02, 2006
TRANSLATONS&TRIBUTES apollinaire,kulmann,jobim,beckett, dudley-smith,herbert,ferrar,
APOLLINAIREYou may listen to my YouTube clip of this translation under my pen name ichthyschiro featuring me voice in English and my youngest granddaughter in French @https://m.youtube.com/watch?t=8s&v=73aTfJS20hk
dynamic parphrase translation of Apollinaire I'll Pleut
It rains voices
of women
fallen from memory:
in you also of raindrops,
rains
the crucial events
of my life.
And these clouds
thunder aloud
a world
with a host of voices.
Hear,it rains
of regret and contempt
weeping
their well-worn tunes,
hear,those falling shackles
that imprison
you head to toe.KUHLMANNLOVE KISS XL1 https://quirinuskuhlmann.blogspot.com/
& recitation of the dynamic translation in open form as below
JOBIM
inspired by the style of the lyrics of Antonio Carlos Jobim's English lyrics to 'The Waters of March https://www.musixmatch.com/lyrics/Antonio-Carlos-Jobim/%C3%81guas-de-Mar%C3%A7o-Waters-Of-March/translation/english
TIME RUNNING OUT A mask a scarf it's the light of the sun, it's the glitter of the dew it's a life begun it's a blade of grass, it is white, it's the dark, it is black ,it is light, it's a glow, it's a spark. the clutter of life, a word in the ear, the noise in the night, the point of the spear. the centre of the world, a walk in the park, the look in the eye, the song of the lark it's the colour of the moon it's the sound of your voice. it's a chair, it's a stair, it's a promise, it's a choice. and the seconds tick by of the time running out it's the ifs and buts, it's the uncertainty. the arch, the shade, the sheet, the bed, the rhythm of the tide, a garden shed. a branch, a twig, a hearty cheer, a lock, a key, the start of the year. the star of the east, the middle of the day, the breeze in the trees, it's a trap, it's a stray. a hole, a ring, a laugh, a scream, a shout, a song, the end of the dream. and the seconds tick by of the time running out it's the ifs and buts, it's the uncertainty.
BECKETT after addenda 23 https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=K2zxSZbm9xw
to go or stay or runaway avoid delay of my being here of my being there of leaving now wondering how of roundabout of hereabouts of this residence a missing presence in this empty house in this empty mind in making decisions to just unwind of being unable to decide about coming home come home to a empty house with a empty mind and not being able to just unwind to go or stay or run away without delay After the style of addenda 23 by Samuel Beckett
DUDLEY-SMITH after hymnal style
Born Anew
When Spring comes again not the warmth..nor the rain not the yellow ..nor the green not the grass or verdant scene; not the winds or blossom bright not the showers or more daylight; but hearing creation's new birth shouted aloud in sky and earth.GEORGE HERBERT after antiphonEach day remember not,forgive my sin My Lord,within In worship as I praise to You my hands I raise; and know you as You are, close up,not from afar Each day remember not,forgive my sin My Lord,within Help me to stop and wait for guidance,to relate when on my knees ,I pray hear better,what You say Each day remember not,forgive my sin My Lord,within Inspired by George Herbert's poem of the Antiphon form and title.FERRAR. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=3wHOzRPR4qwBEYOND LOVE
The sun will rise,the sun will set, no more love will life beget; The day will break,the moon to rise, no more love,as this life dies; The Summer heat,or Winter cold, no more love will this life hold; The Autumn fall,and Springtime green, no more again,will love be seen; The wheat will shoot,the grass will grow, no more again sweet love to know; The grape will ripen on the vine no more,no more will love be mine. inspired after reading an essay by Nicholas Ferrar(1592-1637) the English ascetic of the Little Gidding community(was also TS Eliot's inspiration foth the last of his Four Quartets
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